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Title: A Quiet Morning in Heaven
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam
Word Count: 429
Rating: G
Summary: It’s obvious to them both: this is the end of all things.



“Where are we?” asks Sam.

Dean shakes his head. “I know where it looks like we are.” His gaze lingers on Sam for a moment, as he watches him take this in, watches him nod slightly. Wanting to believe, just not daring to.

Dean sees Sam suck in a breath, wonders why such a sign of life should now be so redolent of the opposite.

They’re standing in a huge field brimming with knee-length grass, green and yellow and shimmering. A dewy breeze slips past, caressing their cheeks. The world rustles softly around them. There are trees, off to the right and the left. Dean doesn’t dare look behind.

Ahead, something rises high above the grass. Dean can make out walls, a roof, a little picket fence.

It looks like a house.

“You think – is it only us?” whispers Sam.

Dean shrugs. “Would it be a problem?”

The look Sam gives him is enough of an answer.

“It’s ours, I think,” says Dean, eventually.

And at that, Sam immediately looks around. Dean watches as his eyes settle on something, follows his gaze.

There’s a long road in the distance, behind the swaying trees.

“Our version,” Sam states. Nods. “There’s mingling,” he adds. “Listen.”

Dean does; he hears the sounds of a far-off crowd, chatter excited but muffled. He hears the tinkling of music. The roar of a motorcycle, revving up its engine. A dog barks, not too far away. The wind carries the sounds of distant laughter to Dean’s ears. And if he squints, he can see the shadows of other buildings, just on the horizon.

It’s a patchwork quilt of paradise.

“Somewhere out there—” begins Sam, but Dean stops him.

Knows who he’s thinking of.

Knows also that there’ll be time enough for that, later. Dean feels lighter, emptier, calmer than he has – ever. There are other things he has let go of, along with life, and suddenly, all he wants to do is taste how that (life, the world, love) might have felt, if things had been like this.

“Right now: here,” he says. “We’ll find them,” he adds, as Sam’s eyebrows buckle. “We’re not going anywhere.”

It’s obvious to them both: this is the end of all things.

Dean gestures at the house, in the distance.

Somewhere nearby, a bird chirps excitedly. The sun peeks over the horizon. The world holds its breath.

With a visible swallow and a quick glance at Dean, Sam steps forward.

The wind lifts behind them, encouragingly.

It’s a cool, quiet morning in heaven.

Dean follows his brother home.

Date: 2009-01-26 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tahirire.livejournal.com
Oh. OH. *happy sobs*

I swear to God, if they both die but Kripke doesn't give us a scene like this to hold on to, I will KILL HIM WITH MY OWN TWO HANDS.

*mems*

Date: 2009-01-27 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
After all the horrible things that happened to the guest stars in 4.12 and the parallels drawn between them and the boys... *gulp* This is self-indulgence in major doses. I want a relatively happy ending too, even if they die.

Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2009-01-26 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/woman_of_/
Oh what a lovely ending that would be, after everything they have been through!

Date: 2009-01-27 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Deserved, isn't it? :)

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-01-26 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelsallfire.livejournal.com
This is one of those bittersweet stories that will haunt me.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad it sticks. I can never tell with these short things. :)

Date: 2009-01-26 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jude-91.livejournal.com
*sobs* If they die at the end, this is what I want for them, they deserve it. I loved this.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Thank you! I agree - this and more. :)

Date: 2009-01-26 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] autumn-lilacs.livejournal.com
Dean feels lighter, emptier, calmer than he has – ever. There are other things he has let go of, along with life, and suddenly, all he wants to do is taste how that (life, the world, love) might have felt, if things had been like this.

*cries*

Date: 2009-01-27 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
They're so tortured, huh? And just when you think things can't get worse, they do. I figured they wouldn't have the weight of all the guilt and regret they carry around in Heaven.

*hugs*

Date: 2009-01-27 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arrenall.livejournal.com
Okay, now you done it. With this, and the news today about Kim Manners, I'm just a blubbering fool. Well, that's just all now. But thanks for this. It was lovely.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
The news about Kim Manners was shocking. I hadn't even realized he was ill. So sad. :(

Thank you for reading, honey! :)

Date: 2009-01-27 02:19 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lark_ascends
Absolutely beautiful.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2009-01-27 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] may7fic.livejournal.com
Just gorgeous and this is what I want for them. Not yet. Maybe some happiness and contentment on earth first but, in the end, this is what they deserve.

Thank-you.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Oh, I can't agree with you enough. Yes, they need something here too. At this moment, with how broken both of them are in their own ways, they need a little joy.

Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-01-27 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlanticise.livejournal.com
If Supernatural ends badly, I'll pretend this is what happened. Eeee. You melt my heart.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Me too. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2009-01-27 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emgrace4.livejournal.com
Absolutely gorgeous! I want them to go down fighting but I want a scene like this after it's all over. I'm going to need this kind of closure.

Awesome job!! Thanks for sharing this!

Date: 2009-01-27 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Exactly - closure! That's what we need. I don't know if we'll get it - Kripke's getting pretty good at the whole fade-out-at-horrible-moments thing. But I think we really need to know that they found peace - it isn't just healing for them, it's healing for us too.

Thank you!

Date: 2009-01-27 11:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
Oh, there's a lovely sense of quiet, of peace in this. Very well done.

It’s a patchwork quilt of paradise.
Such a beautiful line.

Date: 2009-01-27 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it had a serene air - I wasn't sure if the writing portrayed that properly.

Date: 2009-01-27 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mangacat201.livejournal.com
*sob* oh you really made me cry now... that's just... yeah, my image of heaven.
Cat

Date: 2009-01-27 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Tissue? :) Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-01-27 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katiebugs18.livejournal.com
OH OH OH...oh boys. Oh. *wibbles*

Ya know, I don't expect a happy ending, just one with resolution and hope. But this...if we got something like this I would just...*sigh*

Thank you for this.

Date: 2009-01-28 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2009-01-28 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com
HOMG. I hardly ever cry reading fics but this one?

*cries*

So beautifully poignant and perfectly hopeful. I hope this will come true for our boys.

*fumbles for a tissue*

Date: 2009-01-28 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2009-01-29 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sahbel.livejournal.com
sigghh. if only, right?



ps. I just watched 4.12 two days ago.. *goes to hug boys*

Date: 2009-01-29 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
*hugs boys with you*

They're so... GAH. *wibbles*

Date: 2009-01-29 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynzibell.livejournal.com
I want this for them sooooooo bad!!!!!! Please let this happen!!! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

Date: 2009-01-29 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
You're very welcome! :)

... sweet ...

Date: 2009-03-22 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fireflybanner.livejournal.com
I entirely approve. After all that they've suffered, this is just perfect.

Re: ... sweet ...

Date: 2009-03-22 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com
They've suffered too much to not get some sort of happy ending, huh?

Thanks for reading. :)

Date: 2011-01-15 01:04 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] painted-pain.livejournal.com
So hauntingly bittersweet, so much said in the spaces between the lines. Beautiful.

Date: 2011-01-24 12:26 am (UTC)